Wednesday, March 17, 2010

Pulse, Shard, Weary


Shard of Silver Spear
Pulse panics; face grows ashen!
Weary warrior falls

11 comments:

  1. Love that it actually tells a story! Nice work.

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  2. Your weary warrior has certainly run his race!

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  3. Oh, great take on the prompt! And the photo completes it perfectly.

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  4. His final resting place, perhaps!

    Nicely told!!

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  5. Good job. The picture adds impact.

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  6. Great words and pic.
    I don't know why but your recent comment on my blog ended up in the spam queue. Just retrieved it.

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  7. Nice piece! And with a very relevant picture too!

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  8. Love the picture, but your poem created a picture all by itself. I could see it as it happened.

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  9. Great visual to compliment your poem! Being a warrior is not a choice occupation for the weary, indeed!

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  10. I want that face mold to play with and use with my clay :)

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