Thursday, February 18, 2010

Occur, Tidy, Ragged


It occurred to me suddenly this week
That in trying to be tidy and meek
I have worked myself ragged
My edges are jagged
and my writing is somber and bleak.

10 comments:

  1. Hey these words suit my taste. And the winterscape too. Thanks.

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  2. all work and no play LOL been there, done that, threw the dang tee shirt away :) Loved this!

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  3. You have described a common occurrence in my life as a mother and wife :) Nicely done Lilibeth.

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  4. Wow, can I relate or what? Excellent!

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  5. have you been in my mind? Good stuff.

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  6. Very fitting for the season!

    -Tim

    my 3ww:
    http://timremp.blogspot.com/2010/02/within-box.html

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  7. Sometimes we write our thoughts, sometimes our dreams.

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  8. What a great limerick!

    Very easy to relate to this one.

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