it's fine to use pencil...
this has such a sing-song quality to it. Very nice.
A success! Nicely done.
"precise as a crack in the ice" is a great image.
Good job using the prompt! I had fits with this one. To me, abandon and gradual are smooth curvy words, and precise is sharp and poky. I just couldn't do it. I like yours, though!
succint and pretty.
Nice one Lilibeth! I liked the "precise as a crack in the ice" also.
limericky goodness! Love it.