Wednesday, May 26, 2010

Abandon, Gradual, Precise


With gleeful abandon, she sang
A gradual crescendo maintained
Each note as precise
As a crack in the ice.
Applause was a torrent of rain.

8 comments:

  1. this has such a sing-song quality to it. Very nice.

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  2. "precise as a crack in the ice" is a great image.

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  3. Good job using the prompt! I had fits with this one. To me, abandon and gradual are smooth curvy words, and precise is sharp and poky. I just couldn't do it. I like yours, though!

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  4. Nice one Lilibeth! I liked the "precise as a crack in the ice" also.

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