it's fine to use pencil...
Nice juxtaposition of words and pictures!
Wonderful graphic simplicity - you don't need a lot of words to get your meaning across. I liked it!
Excellent take on opposites. Very effective.
Wonderful.. that's really good..
It's really fascinating how the two poems intersect, actually coming from different angles. Well, done!
Fabulous links between photos and words, and a perfect example of the difference in meanings when one's words are "twisted." Great writing!
"toward killing fields"Beautiful. I like how the two stanzas relate.
Lovely read and such apt comparisons too!! Could nearly have been a palindrome :)
the pictures support the words and vice-versa.
the subtlety is beautiful.. thou death is not very pretty...