Did I mention the fate of the fearless first mate
who dove into the deep with the best of intentions?
Well, sadly, along with his fidgety nature,
he'd a curious affinity for explosive inventions
and, mingled, this duo of inherited traits
created a splash of unequaled dimensions.
This weeks words: Affinity, fidget, mention.
Love it! :)
ReplyDeleteFun! Love the sound of this one.
ReplyDeleteThis is the Wednesday when I am taken by surprise, over and over again.
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed the musicality and word combinations. Quite energetic!
My 3WW offering.
I like the rhyme and rhythm to this!
ReplyDeleteBTW, Sno Caps are are small chocolate candies covered with white circular sprinkles.
Some splash. Now he knows why his mother told him to stop fidgeting. A fun piece.
ReplyDeletesheilagh Lee said:Wow great story in that poem
ReplyDeleteAaah!!! Lovely read!!
ReplyDeleteFun and enjoyed it!! :)
ReplyDeleteThe words made quite a splash themselves. Nice one.
ReplyDeleteTalk about 'rocking upon the sea', this one rocks and rolls along quite brilliantly. Needs a good sea-shanty tune to go with it.
ReplyDeleteA splash indeed..wouldn't it be great to have an obit like that -'oops' Jae ;)
ReplyDeleteOh dear! At least he went out with a bang! (commence groans of disapproval).
ReplyDeleteyour wit spills all over the place. This is fun.
ReplyDeletehmmm boys and their toys :)
ReplyDeleteloved the rhythm of this and it ended with a bang...
sorry..couldn't help myself lol
Good rhythm to this. Liked this one!
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