it's fine to use pencil...
Each morning I am greeted in the garden with the web of a Golden Orb spider. They are huge, both the web and the spider and her nighttime labor stretches across the garden path. Usually I am wary and duck under but often I am caught and struggle free before I am wrapped up and stored away for later consumption. Loved the poem!
i love the rhythm in this piece..like the clickety-clack of knitting needles..making a web..jae
Well done. It is no mean feat getting the three words into a limerick!
a beautiful ode to a spider.
Very nice. I had to read it twiceTo notice it wasA Limerick.But I still don't like spiders!Cheers!JzB
Very well done. I especially liked "as lightly as a sigh". I had an Orb spider on my deck the other day that fit this piece perfectly.
I'm much too lazy to survive as a spider. Love the line "light as a sigh" !